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I Am... by ~rednekchik:iconrednekchik:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open




I am but a star in the evening sky
but a twinkle in my father's eye
the spark that lit my lover's fire
full of passion and buring desire
I am the wing's upon their back,
with all you think you see me lack
I am the picture upon the wall
without a heart that was so small
for if you knew who I am......
I am all of what I am not!
©2005-2009 ~rednekchik
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once again another poem by...me

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~ducks-rebellion Jan 25, 2005, 5:49:31 AM
Your photos you add to these are so very abstract! they can be interpreted with a meaning to the poem (nice as always) sweet and mythological! Bye the way, Dumbo says he cant beleive Fish Boy wants to get hitched with you and i reminded him AGAIn about your birthday, you might wanna give him a call just to make sure tho. I had to use him as a bodygaurd against Derek earlier today! ^__^ Love xoxoxoxox, :blowkiss:
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~rednekchik Jan 25, 2005, 1:37:33 PM
oh,...well you can tell dumbo to behave and pleeease tell him to call me and leave fish boy alone i think he is cute!!!very cute!!!(at least in pictures!!!)and thanks fr the comment
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~sk8erchick Jan 28, 2005, 8:45:19 AM
this poem is very open with feeling which i love...u have great talent...i love ur work...:rose: *janet* :rose:...wish you luck on more of your works to come

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:rose:"Life is a gift but death is victory":rose:
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~rednekchik Jan 28, 2005, 3:34:56 PM
eeeeeeee.thank you so much i am so happy to know that people are looking at my work!!!
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~afireinsidedc Mar 12, 2005, 7:10:22 PM
this is really cool, but u dont realise it until its done, ur just like, reading it, then ur done and its like, this is really cool.
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~afireinsidedc Mar 12, 2005, 7:14:46 PM
sorry about that^ i just read it, and it makes no sense. but the poem is still aweosome, it really flows. good job :clap:
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